Talk:Paul Colin (journalist)

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Assessment[edit]

I have assessed this article for the Biography project as a Start class article. I believe that the article is a Start class because of the following issues:

Coverage and accuracy: in the article the prose should mention when and where he was born (e.g. in an Early life section), also what did he do during the First World War? Currently the article just says that he interupted his studies for the war, but did he participate as a soldier, etc.?
Structure: the first heading "Biography" is problematic, in this case I would suggest changing it to "Early life";
Referencing: inline citations to reliable sources should be provided (at least one at the end of every paragraph, although more is fine);
Grammar: the article has some issues with changing tense, for instance in the 1930s section "...Paul Colin becomes fascinated by extreme-right movements". This should be written in the past tense, e.g. "Paul Colin became fascinated by..."
Supporting materials: the article needs an infobox or image.

These are just a few suggestions. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 02:55, 13 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Arnaud Fraiteur[edit]

I've been doing a bit of work on the Tir national page. The French version lists Fraiteur as having been executed at the Tir national, whereas this page says at Breendonk. Can someone who knows the subject please check and provide a reliable citation to get all three articles in alignment with history please. Thanks, Martin of Sheffield (talk) 22:41, 21 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]