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UK/US spelling[edit]

The author of the article needs to choose either UK or US spelling and be consistent.

So choose either "armored" (US) or "armoured" (UK). Or choose "defense" (US) or "defence" (UK).

As for the date format, "March 21, 2017" looks like the US format to me (month, day, comma, year), whereas the UK date format would be "21 March 2017" (day, month, year & no comma).

One final point, I don't understand what "techniques" means in this sentence: "The trials of the Kozak-2M1, an improved tactical version of the Kozak-2, continued from October 2018 to July 2019, during which time the vehicle was tested with over 50 techniques and in a simulated combat environment."

If the author could explain what is meant by "techniques" here I could suggest a better term. Maybe the author simply meant "The trials of the Kozak-2M1, an improved tactical version of the Kozak-2, were carried out between October 2018 and July 2019. During this period, the vehicle underwent 50 trials in a simulated combat environment." 2.25.65.25 (talk) 20:55, 4 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]